Exk Posted January 8, 2018 Content Count: 701 Joined: 08/19/16 Status: Offline Share Posted January 8, 2018 @Gator Wondering if you can word it as "The AWP is KOS unless the person who picks it up announces that he picked it up from a T" "The M4A1-S is not KOS as it is commonly dropped by detectives in favor of other weapons, however it is still suspicious if they do not announce picking it up." Atm with "The Awp is not KOS" and with "The m4a1-s is also not KOS" it kinda sounds at first glance as if by default the awp is not KOS even though the rest of your sentence counters it. I think it'd just be a little cleaner in explanation to have both normal situations be stated first with their exceptions following it. Link to comment
Gator Posted January 8, 2018 Content Count: 2669 Joined: 03/29/09 Status: Offline Share Posted January 8, 2018 @Gator Wondering if you can word it as "The AWP is KOS unless the person who picks it up announces that he picked it up from a T" "The M4A1-S is not KOS as it is commonly dropped by detectives in favor of other weapons, however it is still suspicious if they do not announce picking it up." Atm with "The Awp is not KOS" and with "The m4a1-s is also not KOS" it kinda sounds at first glance as if by default the awp is not KOS even though the rest of your sentence counters it. I think it'd just be a little cleaner in explanation to have both normal situations be stated first with their exceptions following it. Good point. I changed it to this, so hopefully it should be good. 1 Link to comment
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