These two jump out straight away.
1) The LR one makes it sound like LRs are not allowed on our server. I prefer the other way ti was phrased (somehing like "CTs are not required to give a last request")
2) I think slay is a bit extreme here, there are often cases where cells are not opened before because of rebelling ts, or that the map takes ages for cts to reach cells. I would prefer something like "CTs must open cells by 4, or action by an Admin may be taken". Its more vague than the other, but leaves a lot more room for admins in the server to not resort to slaying the entire CT team simply because cells aren't open. Admins could instead noclip and open them themselves, or use the slap function to draw attention.